I didn’t get into beta club and I’m a little confused on why I didn’t 😭. Tell me if I did something wrong before I email her please. Here’s my grades here's my teacher recommendation I submitted my essay before the due date here's my essay
As for your opening sentence in your essay it’s a bunch of bull$hit & to be honest it’s a sad story, it’s a run on & play a flocking fiddle it has nothing to do with why you want to join Beta Club or your voluntary experiences. In addition I say you still have a chance so light a fire under your @$$ & rewrite the flocking thing & send it in. (As for the world I’m sure the world would love to join The National Beta Club & as for me I strongly & without a doubt believe that The National Beta Club should join me & the highest honor it would be as well.) Light a fire under your @$$ as I said. Write your essay with power, write your essay with leadership & make them want to join you instead. Write from the heart & write positive, & be different as well.
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I wasn’t trying to come of it as being sad. I was just explaining what I did for people in need during the pandemic.
Seems exclusive to me. With those scores, I think you should have been selected, but those requirements of which they speak seems a little far reaching in my opinion. Find something else.
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