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Am I using a SEMI-COLON correctly here? (Best Anwser)

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Sexy-Senior-09 (Age:18 to 24)     When: 17 days ago
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I have a paper due tomorrow about living on Mars and I'm just writing whatever.

Is this sentence correct?

Living on Mars will grant you many prospects; for example, you will be the first of many to begin mining for precious metals that can be worth lots of money.


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armyant      When: 17 days ago
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Answerer "For example," is not an independent clause, but it's dependency is to the clause which follows it, therefore a stronger punctuation than a comma is required to avoid a run-on sentence. A semicolon is one option; a full stop is another. - 17 days ago
Question Asker I know I can say "Living on Mars will grant you many prospects. For example; you will be the first of many to begin mining for precious metals that can be worth lots of money."

But like you said I'm correct? or do I need to change something? - 17 days ago
Question Asker I meant to put a comma after for example not a semi-colon - 17 days ago
Answerer Your punctuation is correct, I'd be more concerned with the redundancy of saying "precious metals that can be worth lots of money."

Precious metals ARE worth lots of money, by definition of the adjective "precious". - 17 days ago
Question Asker I'm a man of my word. Here you go. Thanks.. - 17 days ago

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Little-Hippie      When: 17 days ago
The sentence structure itself is rather awkward.

The Semicolon doesn't belong there. The first sentence was a complete idea.
Try to shorten and separate your ideas and keep the tone in the 3rd person as opposed to the second.

"Living on Mars will grant the residents many prospects. For example, these residents will have the opportunity to mine for precious metals found on Mars. This lucrative opportunity will be available to them long before many others travel to Mars."

A semicolon is really only ever used prior to an advancement on an idea or within an elaborate list, such as:

"There are three main precious metals found on Mars; aluminum, found in the meteorites; Mercury, found at the basins of the dried oceans; and iridium, found in the rock formations."

Or

"Several fast food restaurants can be found in each of London, England; Paris, France; Dublin, Ireland; and Madrid, Spain."

It's basically either when you're making a list of items in which commas are not appropriate for use because the list ideas have commas within them.

If it's not being used for a list, the ideas must be very closely related to each other.

"A man chooses; a slave obeys."
"I like to eat cows; however, I don't like to be eaten by them."
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Question Asker So if I use something like this it still applies to what you said? Wrong?

Mars is a lot farther to the sun than planet Earth; therefore, the temperature will be a lot colder than you?re used to - 17 days ago
Answerer Yes; in terms of semicolons, that's correct. - 17 days ago
Cool-Relax I think this should get best answer; he actually got into the proper use of semicolons...which wins major points with me, haha - 17 days ago
armyant The question asker's use of the semicolon is correct, as he used it to separate two independent clauses connected by a transitional phrase. So the semicolon does, in fact, belong there. - 17 days ago
Question Asker If I could give Best Answers to everyone I would Cool-Relax, but..... You won major points with me ;) - 17 days ago
 
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