I have a paper due tomorrow about living on Mars and I'm just writing whatever.
Is this sentence correct?
Living on Mars will grant you many prospects; for example, you will be the first of many to begin mining for precious metals that can be worth lots of money.
"For example," is not an independent clause, but it's dependency is to the clause which follows it, therefore a stronger punctuation than a comma is required to avoid a run-on sentence. A semicolon is one option; a full stop is another. - 17 days ago
Question Asker
I know I can say "Living on Mars will grant you many prospects. For example; you will be the first of many to begin mining for precious metals that can be worth lots of money."
But like you said I'm correct? or do I need to change something? - 17 days ago
Question Asker
I meant to put a comma after for example not a semi-colon - 17 days ago
Answerer
Your punctuation is correct, I'd be more concerned with the redundancy of saying "precious metals that can be worth lots of money."
Precious metals ARE worth lots of money, by definition of the adjective "precious". - 17 days ago
Question Asker
I'm a man of my word. Here you go. Thanks.. - 17 days ago
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The Semicolon doesn't belong there. The first sentence was a complete idea. Try to shorten and separate your ideas and keep the tone in the 3rd person as opposed to the second.
"Living on Mars will grant the residents many prospects. For example, these residents will have the opportunity to mine for precious metals found on Mars. This lucrative opportunity will be available to them long before many others travel to Mars."
A semicolon is really only ever used prior to an advancement on an idea or within an elaborate list, such as:
"There are three main precious metals found on Mars; aluminum, found in the meteorites; Mercury, found at the basins of the dried oceans; and iridium, found in the rock formations."
Or
"Several fast food restaurants can be found in each of London, England; Paris, France; Dublin, Ireland; and Madrid, Spain."
It's basically either when you're making a list of items in which commas are not appropriate for use because the list ideas have commas within them.
If it's not being used for a list, the ideas must be very closely related to each other.
"A man chooses; a slave obeys." "I like to eat cows; however, I don't like to be eaten by them."
The question asker's use of the semicolon is correct, as he used it to separate two independent clauses connected by a transitional phrase. So the semicolon does, in fact, belong there. - 17 days ago
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If I could give Best Answers to everyone I would Cool-Relax, but..... You won major points with me ;) - 17 days ago
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