Somewhere between our passion and conversation We lost the connection from our past. You responded to me less, I doubted you more, The signs were there it couldn't last.
Desire's urging couldn't sustain us, What I tried to convey wasn't getting through. But the hardest to deal with was my aching heart, Knowing in the end my love wasn't enough for you.
After two years of trying to hold it together Our destinies worked twice as hard to tear us apart. With my actions I seemed to quietly admit defeat, Yet the screaming to salvage us came from my heart.
Others were stealing from me your time, Your so-called friends robbing me of what should be mine. When I lie in bed staring into empty space, There are images that cloud my mind that aren't easily erased.
You accused me of being selfish, Only concerned about what mattered to me. Yet, you seemed to live only to satisfy yourself. Why is it that fact you seemed not to see?
Some question marks in my head were warranted, Others came from the secrets and the lies. As time went on, I wished for your absence; It was the days you appeared, disappointing me, that I dispised.
Now the embraces we share are cordial, The emotions once arousing are now dull and dry. Your complacency has affected my attitude. So when the rest of my feelings for you die?
You're definitely not the one you seemed to be at first, Those days when you were giving our love a try. You've succeeded in pushing me away this time, Making it easier to say goodbye.
Update: Plz to copy this any send this to someone else I worked very hard to think of this poem and won a award for it. So what do you think of it
8 months ago
It may be good for a song, but as a poem, I agree with gravy girl. You could try putting a melody to it and submit it to someone. It leaves me thinking about whoever it is who broke your heart.
I can tell this is heartfelt, but it needs some work. There's no metaphor and the rhythm is all over the place. I don't mean to be discouraging. Good poetry is really hard to write and takes a lot of effort. Keep at it.
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