So I wrote this poem about this guy, I have known him since October 2014, he's long distance, we would chat everynight sometimes for upto 5 hours, Skype, text, and speak on the phone, overtime feelings developed on both sides... I wrote this poem for him about the first night when I met him again in January 2015, hadn't seen him since October 2014, I wanted to know, guys, if a girl wrote this for you, what would you think?
I REMEMBER THE NIGHT WHEN I MET YOU NEAR THE BEACH
HEART SKIPPED A BEAT WHEN I SAW YOU
WHEN YOU EMBRACED ME IT FELT SO RIGHT
WE WE'RE BOTH SHY
DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY
WHEN YOU LOOKED AT ME FOR A SECOND AND OUR EYES MET
IN THAT MOMENT I FELT LIKE YOU WAS GOING TO KISS ME
BUT YOU DIDN'T
I FELT MYSELF BLUSH SO LEANED MY HEAD AGAINST YOU
AND YOU HAD YOUR ARM AROUND ME
I FELT LOST IN THAT MOMENT
WHEN YOU WALKED ME BACK
AND WE SHARED OUR FIRST KISS
IT FELT SO MAGICAL
AND IN THAT MOMENT I WAS LOST
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I remember the night when we met near the beach.
Our hearts skipping beats as our eyes finally meet.
When you embraced me, it felt so right,
even though we were both so very shy.
I didn't know what to say, when you looked at me that way.
In that very moment, I felt like you were going to kiss me, but to no avail.
I felt myself blush, I leaned my head against you.
You had your arms wrapped around me, lost in the moment.
When you walked me back, we shared our first kiss.
It felt so magical, lost in the midst.1