Should I continue this song?

I just wrote some verses because my friend told me it sounded good the first verse.
I think it sounds bad, but, should I finish it?

What I wrote till now:

Young adult,
In life alone.
My way is long,
Rough and though.
I have to leave,
To truly live.
Family and friends,
Behind my back.
School is out,
Work is in.
I don't know what to do,
In this new phase I go through.

Rough and tough*


What Guys Said 1

  • Did you mean rough and tough?

    • Yes, sorry, English isn't my first language. :(
      Thank you for correcting it! :)

    • Ok. And to answer the question properly, I think you should continue the song. It can only be improved from how it is now.

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