I will give you my honest opinion. It is alright, but you have a lot of room for improvement. Maybe this is just my personal taste, but I like when poems are a lot more subtle; when you have to think about it and figure it out, and when they can be interpreted in many ways. That's ok if you prefer to be more straightforward, I just feel it is more artistic the other way. I think you should try adding more techniques like metaphors, similes, personification, juxtaposition, etc. A few lines which I like in your poem: "how it makes you feel as cold as the white snow" "You feel as bare as the cold tree with its leaves shed" I think these are good similes. Work on these techniques and you will get a lot better.
I am German, therefore I generally dislike most English poems a normal person would write, considering how much more possibilities my language has. Even just that your verses are inconsistent and end after words like "the" or "of" makes me sad, considering a break after a word like that doesn't make much sense.
It's pretty good. I can tell the writers young but I can also tell a lot of effort was put into the imagery and conveying a specific theme. There's clear direction and purpose here. Hopefully the author will keep writing. Who knows what they might write.
Whoa, it seems very good to me! I love the way you it starts all happy with the birds singing, then gets sadder and sadder. Also, how you described emotions by comparing them with elements of nature. Very meaningful, good job! 😊