Please no religious bias. I'm asking artistically not religiously
Yes I know that the sign it not right. I did that so it would be easier to read. Also GAG made me scale down the image so it is a bit damaged from that. King of the Jews is illegible from the scaling.
Most Helpful Girl
I think that you could bring a bit more creativity to it. Play a bit with focus and details. I do enjoy the detail in the cross, but I feel like you could do more. I think with a little more revision, this could be a nice piece.1
Most Helpful Guy
Graphite is an extremely difficult medium to work with.
You did well with the cross. Though by your shadow, that side would be somewhat darker. Additionally the object the cross is embedded in is unclear. Clarity not being a prerequisite for art, I think the drawing is good.
Art needs not be good, nor accurate. Art needs to make you feel.
Does this make you feel? Does this make you feel what the quote makes you feel?1