My friend wrote a song, what you think of it?

Reborn.
1. Thank you for the fairy tale
It was beautiful.
Now I have to sail myself
And meet a waterfall.
Chorus:
Fly with the wind.
Waves will hold you till sunrise.
What do you feel?
Love won't read in his blue eyes.
2. My ship can endure this,
It was made of steel.
Captain, don't remove your wrist.
You're like ice, you're still.
Chorus:
Fly with the wind.
Waves will hold you till sunrise.
What do you feel?
Love won't read in his blue eyes.
3. There's no way I'm coming back.
Leave the past behind,
Build a new ship after crash.
You're reborn tonight.
Chorus:
Fly with the wind.
Waves will hold you till sunrise.
What do you feel?
Love won't read in his blue eyes.


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  • Good potential but it needs some fine toonjng
    I wrote songs often my self

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What Girls Said 1

  • Love that. But its pretty sad.

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What Guys Said 6

  • It don't really matter if the melody doesn't match. Also, the lyrics are generic as fuck

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  • Snds depressing.

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  • It is good but a little too upbeat for how I'm feeling right now

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  • Pretty good. Kinda long. Cut out 2 lines.

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  • Depends on the genre.

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  • I'm always jaded when I hear love songs mostly because it's like 50% of like the whole music industry. Everybody writes about love. But I do like the lyrics. I'm a fan of more cryptic lyrics. Good extended analogy.

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