İs this poem beautifull?

Such A Loving

I loved such women they were already absent
They would wear rain, the same as the autumn
When I caressed them a bit, it was as if they were children
When I let them go, their eyes'd get foggy out of fear
I loved such women they were already absent
Such a loving was never before seen

No, don't think they have forgotten me
Still I get their letters once in a while
They were not real, they were hopes
An old song, perhaps a poem
I loved such women they were already absent
Such a loving was never before seen

They held my hand in my lonelinesses
Their distant whispers make me shudder
It was as if they were clouds in the sky
Who knows to where they have disappeared
I loved such women they were already absent
Such a loving was never before seen


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Most Helpful Guy

  • "When I caressed them a bit, it was as if they were children" Sounds a bit weird.

    And illegal.

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    • No they are not children :-) poet writte this poem to imaginary woman he has always looked for but not found

What Girls Said 1

  • I dont care for it. But hey whatever floats you boat...

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    • Wtf are you saying? And leave here İF you dont care

    • Im giving you my opinion, which is what you asked for. Chill the fuck out...

What Guys Said 0

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