How s that poem?

Control

Silence, obedience, punishment
makes you deprived of all movement
Paralysed, and indifferent
You can't react or you ll be delinquant
Discipline is a trend
Expression is a rant
Condemnation is the end
Order, control, personal fulfillment
A stage play of power entitlement
A display of human excrement

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    Everlasting pain
    Sadness fills my empty heart
    Love me, let me free

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    • Don't know why I wrote that, the first 3 lines made me think of abusive relationships

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    • Wow thanks for mho :)

    • wlc :)

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