Opinion on my design?


Opinion on my design?I know it's messy but it's my first attempt at hand painting a pencil case. I would like to go into selling so constructive criticism would be greatly received! Would you buy something like this?


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Most Helpful Guy

  • That is really good and looks marketable - Well done

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Most Helpful Girl

  • Needs more details it's not a bad start. You should try screen printing.

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    • I know I'm a dummy, but what's screen printing haha

    • It's like sort of like using the stencils except pushing paint through a screen. This way you can have more layers and it can be more detailed.

    • I'll defiantly give it a go, thank you !

What Guys Said 1

  • Looks nice but consider following rule of thirds. Maybe position it in a corner instead of centered

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What Girls Said 2

  • Is it a feather?, sorry, if it is, it requires more detail, maybe a feather is not the best thing to start with, maybe something that requires less detail but still has a wow factor, maybe some brighter colours?

    But I will say its a great idea for a small business, bespoke pencil cases, never seen that before.:)

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  • good for a start..

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