I would say it's too much. It lacks restraint and finesse. I like what your going for a lot (or at least what I'm pretty sure you're going for) But the black stuff around your eyes is too thick. I get that it's a stye that you are trying out but I think it looks clunky
U would trim the eyebrows too. The two rings on one lip I'm not a fan of yet I feel like it's one of those things that grows on you and it just fit's your personality. But if you're not feeling confident about it and you still want "More" I would try a nose ring on the side of just one nostril.
I also think you should try to find a way to make your hair less stiff. It could be from too much. . . ok I have no idea what lol but it's a tad too stiff from what i can tell.
You are pretty. You have a cute face, amazing eyes and a body I just want to hug lol. But to be brutally honest I think you need to pull back what your doing just a bit because between the heavy makeup, the pants and the bracelets (it's not that you have so many it's just the particular ones you have) it looks a little childish. You look younger than you are and not in a good way.
Don't let that discourage you though. You have a cool style and you just need to refine it to get it somewhere that will turn heads in the best kind of way. Finally I just want to say this. I know before I talked about feeling comfortable but the reality is, being a trendsetter by nature will sometimes make you feel a little uncomfortable. Fashion is risky and it's already pretty awesome that you're brave enough to not only try these things but look for criticize!
if you're in high school or younger, it's passable... HS and younger is mostly about looks and making statements... BUT if you're out of high school it's simply ridiculous. :D! That's just my opinion. this type of look is really stupid if you're older and not part of the "media" and such...
OMG, I haven't seen someone dress like that in my city for the last 4 years. You'd have fit in with quite a few kids that I knew high school just based on how you dress, looks like you walked out of 2007 minus the black veil brides shirt. Just swap that with a Saosin or underoath shirt and you'd have blended in just fine.
Also you don't look bad like that but then again I've been around that shit in one form or another since 7th grade and still have friends that are either ex scene or emo kids. Can't seem to ditch that sub culture for some reason, Hell at my last job I worked with 3 guys that pretty much listened to nothing but Post Hardcore and Metal core and they dressed completely normal. But in all seriousness you look fine but tone down the eyeliner, other than that I have no issue with your style. Your kind of unique nowadays since no one really dresses like that and since every one stole everyones clothing.
I knew right away you were 17 before I looked at your age. Your look and your style. I've always thought teens that dressed like you were cool, bold, and didn't care what people thought (when I was in high school). I still think that way now. I love the style although personally I'm a girly girl :D
I don't like your style. You're at that age where you figure.. hey, if I can't fit in I might as well take ownership of my "outcast" status. So I understand that.
Maybe you don't have what the popular girls have. But you don't have to hide yourself. Be who you really are.. and FYI nobody is really a goth. You will find that as an adult the whole popularity contest bullshit gets a lot more manageable. High school sucks.
To be completely honest I find it super unattractive and a plea for attention. I really am sugar coating it. How much time and effort does it take in the morning for you to look like Casper the ghost's annoying goth cousin? You look like the child of sonic the hedgehog and a panda. Did you use a sharpie to draw on your eyeliner and eyebrows? You look like you've been punched in both eyes. You're free to dress however you want, but in my opinion it's a pretty shitty look.