It's very bright, I really like it. The only thing that throws it off a little is that the boots blend in with the leggings because they're the same color. It doesn't look bad, though, and I can't think of any other shoes that would look better besides some black flats.
I don't know anything about style, but I think it looks nice. I agree with the girls that your boots and leggings are too close in color though. I can't believe no one has mentioned the jean jacket yet. I rarely see them where I go to school.