What do you guys think?

I recently started writing as a hobby... Actually scratch that... I've always been a writer, I recently started telling people about it and I could use some feedback.

What parts did you like? What didn't you like? Did anything stand out as confusingly worded or out of place?
Any feedback at all would be appreciated.

http://davidiusthedudeicus.tumblr.com/


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  • some description bout yer story?

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