Should I stop writing?

i like to write peoms but they always end depressing like this one

the raven in the crows nest
misfit crows told him never knowing he's a raven
creepy siblings called him never understanding
ugly his parents said to him not caring
until one day he ends his suffering
he spreads his beautiful wing and dies
leaving behind nothing but sorrow
no one knew he was suffering
they thought he was unbreakable
they didn't understand they didn't try to understand
that's why he left he was misunderstood
but he was misunderstanding what he was leaving he
was loved just not treated how he thought love was
he had a family even though they didn't act it
they were there so why did he leave they think until
the end dying sad and still misunderstanding why he left
should i just stop writing?


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Most Helpful Guy

  • I think that is quite good - Keep on writing

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What Guys Said 3

  • R u mad... ?

    U really have good writing skills... so don't think to stop writing
    Infact... concentrate on it

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  • No keep going with it people like a sad sad story it makes them feel better about things going on in their on life

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  • Nice nursery rhyme

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What Girls Said 1

  • No you shouldn't stop writing..
    You have talent, it seems
    But that poem seems more like a story than a poem..
    And I.. How do I explain it?
    I know it was supposed to be depressing and sad but I felt.. Nothing..
    Sorry, but you should never give up!!
    Ever!

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