Looks like I gotta enterTAIN, cause she gotta huge ass and I've ascerTAINED, that she & I are not different & are actually the SAME?

She & I are gonna be in bed & she gonna be callin my NAME.

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I wrote this rap, what do u think?


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Most Helpful Guy

  • yo, mic check 1 2

    So you wrote this rap
    do you want to show off?
    are you looking for fame?
    You're anon so I don't even know your name
    What do I think? I think it was lame
    I think you should bow your head in shame
    Did you see that just now? It was off the chain
    To me. . . this is just a game

    http://s6.postimg.org/jxd13ebb5/coverd.jpg

    here we go, part two lava flow
    hell's where the imps go

    This imp, his name is tyrone
    You better hope he don't catch you alone
    right now he's looking for your home

    He's escaped from hell
    right now he's looking for your girl

    When he finds her he'll rip off her thong
    Do you think that's wrong?
    He's tyrone so his dick is long

    She better watch out because he's going in with no lube
    he likes it crude
    damn, this imp is rude

    He ain't out there to take a life
    he just wants to fuck somebodies wife
    Long dick style

    33.media.tumblr.com/.../...02zJfR1sxcftfo1_400.gif

    *rap battle started* / *shots fired* / *calling you out* #DooMgangster #RapBattle #Hashtag

    I probably could've done better but I'm a bit tired right now

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    • @mr90skid I'm tagging you in. Back me up

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2nzQMHLk6LA

      drop those lyrics hard, ^ here's a beat to give you some inspiration

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    • @MCtricks

      That's what I like to see, I also wanted to see the askers response but. . . I think you're too much for the asker to handle

      @Mustachekitteh

      That was actually alright, you got some potential. Maybe you'll be famous one day. That video was nice but you need to watch more stuff like this

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OZ6G7qwjom4

      #ThugLife

      @ Asker C'mon ! It's been 10 days ! 10 days ! ! Are you leaving us hanging? You. . . nincompoop (I always wanted to use that word) that's right, I went there

    • @YourFutureEx I'm tagging you in, somehow I got MHO for this

      You can drop some lyrics if you want

What Guys Said 7

  • Bruh, bruh lemme check out your mixtape. (Sorry just watched that filthy frank video)

    But in all seriousness, when writing songs, full on rhymes can get cliche. Try using near rhymes every once in a while to mix it up some. All in all though, good job!

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  • Looks good to me

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  • Is that even in English?

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  • It's sounds really cool. Good job

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  • Battle me and get rekt kid,
    I got more Flows than Progressive,
    Play my game
    Hit you harder than Mary-Jane
    Make you cry
    Like the ending to citizen Kane.

    Hahaha

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  • It's horrible.

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  • I think if you started a rap career it would die faster than 2Pac did after being shot the second time.

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What Girls Said 3

  • Are you a lesbian?

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  • What is this

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  • First of all... GIRL, BYE.

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