Are these good lyric lines I made up?

Sometimes I forget how to breathe,
everything's getting harder for me,
what have you done to my heart?
You tore everything apart.


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Most Helpful Guy

  • Yeah they are good

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What Guys Said 4

  • looks good. do you have more or is that just the start of a song?

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  • Sometimes I forget how to breathe,
    remembering you.
    everything's getting harder for me,
    when I see you.
    what have you done to my heart?
    So painful because of you.

    You tore my world apart,
    I want them back.

    Sorry, I went overboard.

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  • nice guessing its a love song and i dont like that shit but nice

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  • gaaayyyy AYYYYY AYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY AHHHHH!!!

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What Girls Said 3

  • That's a good start.
    So far it flows pretty well.
    Continue that :)

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  • At Thirteen, you sound like me with Thee... Poetry.
    Good luck and keep on truckin'. xx

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  • Sounds good... Keep at it.. You're probably gonna end up famous... lol

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