What sounds better on a resume?

1 - responsible for providing customer service as well as dealing with any complaints which may have arisen
2 - responsible for providing customer service as well as dealing with any complaints Which arose

  • First one
    Vote A
  • Second one
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  • Neither sound active and both have questionable grammar. What was your job and what are you trying to say you did?

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    • Why questionable grammar

    • The working is blocky, you're using too many "as"s, and you have needless complications.

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What Girls Said 2

  • Change " which arose" to "that arises" for #2 and go with that.

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  • The second one

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