" Disrespecting me is not something that i will tolerate".
Most Helpful Girl
Yes, albeit a long-winded and somewhat awkward one. "I won't tolerate disrespect" would be a way to shorten it and make it flow easier.2
Most Helpful Guy
well it makes sense to me, but I got a feeling my English prof will be like "no its like this"
"Disrespecting me is something I will not tolerate."
capitalize the I
period goes inside the quotation marks, unless you're British then they tend to do it either way.1