Most Helpful Guy
The first photo should be rotated clockwise several degrees. Also the layout makes the thumb much to prominent. It sticks out like a, well, soar thumb.
In the 2nd photo, ambient light is much to bright, and makes the light painting less effective.
Good ideas, stick with it.0
Most Helpful Girl
Struggling to find the point of either photo.
First one is i guess a kind of interesting action shot. The BG is too busy and the photo could be a bit sharper though.
The second one does nothing for me. The BG is very distracting and i just dont see any appeal in this photo...
Overall, no i would not consider these professional.0