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Can someone fix these sentences into correct grammar and arrangement

Duties:

New Accounts Representative do profiling and evaluating clients and be able to recommend them the right products to attain their financial needs. They also maintain multiple accounts and report to manager the sales of personal accounts, loans and line of credit

Skills:

New accounts should have a communicating skill, problem-solving skill, organizing skill, and sales driven skill. She should be able to communicate effectively to the customers, help the, with their problems and concerns, handle multiple accounts and confident and reliable in delivering the products and service to customers.


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  • New Accounts Represenative Needed who is able to do Profiling and Evaluating clients, as well as being able to recommend them to the right products to attain their financial needs. They must also maintain Multiple accounts and Report to the Manager of Sales, Personal accounts, Loans and Line of credit.
    Represenative should have Good Communication skills, which includes Problem-solving skills, and be Sales driven. He or She should be prepared to handle multiple accounts, and Uphold Confidence and Reliability in delivering
    the products, along with stupendous service provided to all customers.

    *Some of this was not needed, was somewhat repetitious so I eliminated it.
    Good luck. xx

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  • I'll add corrections in brackets.

    Duties:
    New Accounts Representative (s) do profiling and evaluating (of) clients and (must) be able to recommend them the right products to attain their financial needs. They also maintain multiple accounts and report to (the) manager the sales of personal accounts, loans, and line (s) of credit.

    Skills:
    New Account (s) (Representatives) should have (communication skills), problem-solving skill (s), (organizational skills), and (be sales driven). (They) should be able to communicate effectively to the customers, help (them) with their problems and concerns, handle multiple accounts, and (be) confident and reliable in delivering the products and services to customers.

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  • They evaluate clients and able to recommend

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