I was trying a new writing style today. Would love to hear Gagger's thoughts :D
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I'm no poem expert, but I've dealt with trying to write song lyrics so I know it's at least difficult. This is actually quite fantastic from my point of view. I like the repetition of the word "such--" I feel it help the flow and emphasis too. This kind of poetry one of those things I wish I could do, but alas, I lack the ability.
Personally, I feel like it's almost harder to write without a typical rhyme scheme because it leaves things more open ended. I think you pulled it off though. 👍0
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