I just wrote a song, what do you think? :)

My English not so good, and I know my voice sucks. :)

So I just tried to write something for my ex, I know most of you guys will find this funny but I just wanted to share and hear your thoughts about my song :)

So thank you all. link


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  • you have an excellent sense. I kept trying to stop listening & I kept having to FLIP BACK to it because of some vocal flourish, etc -- did you write this melody? I think you have a 'great sense' =)

    you're in my band now, we'll be called The Planets. I get the asteroid belt =P =) sing! lol *wails a guitar* =)

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      Do you really think that it was good? :)

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      And yes the melody belongs mine of course :) I just want to know what you think about the lyrics

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      i really do =) I would be totally willing-&-under-your-spell if you wrote this for me =) the lyrics are hard to make out, but I am totally seduced. =) x you're f***ing hot too lol. YOU'RE IN MY BAND, lolol.

      i'll be the Crazy Czech & you can be the Looker From Turkey (if you are (from Turkey)). I got the balls & you got the good looks ;)

      seriously! I had not looked at your other videos - you are gorgeous AND musically genius. this ex must have socks in his pants lololol - you're gorgeous - !