Can anyone give me any suggestions?

Me and my ex broke up 8 months ago and things ended badly because I had a hard time but I never apologized for the way I acted so I've been trying to write something for the longest time. She is all I ever think about still and have finally wrote a long letter to apologize and to try and become friends. Its qutie long because if its the last thing ever between us I want it to inclued everything on how I feel. I was wondering if anyone had the time to take a look at it and make suggestions?

thanks,

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docs. google. com/document/d/1eoriAMKs4zqVtgB0hh2UV4_SUOYMtaPkY45rOF1PFe0/edit? pli=1

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  • sounds good!

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    • You end up reading the whole thing? You don't think it's to repetitive or has something I shouldn't say? Thank You so much; means a lot to me :)

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