How does this poem sound? I'm writing due to pain?


how  does this poem sound? I'm writing due to pain?


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Most Helpful Guy

  • I think it's very artistic overall. The first three lines and the last two lines work well, due to the rhyming. Using lessen then lesson seems out of place.

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Most Helpful Girl

  • Cheesy.. I don't get why you'd make that public

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    • Sometimes it helps for people to do that.

    • @doublecheck I feel sorry for her if she bottles it up inside. Smh

    • So I bottle things up inside, because I don't write whiney poems and post them on Facebook? (or whatever the hell that is)
      Alrightly then ;)

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What Guys Said 1

  • there is subject but there is no reference and a lot of repetitions

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What Girls Said 3

  • I like it, especially the ending :)

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  • Awesome
    I like the ending

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  • It sounds well

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