I think it's very artistic overall. The first three lines and the last two lines work well, due to the rhyming. Using lessen then lesson seems out of place.
Cheesy.. I don't get why you'd make that public
Sometimes it helps for people to do that.
@doublecheck I feel sorry for her if she bottles it up inside. Smh
So I bottle things up inside, because I don't write whiney poems and post them on Facebook? (or whatever the hell that is)Alrightly then ;)
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there is subject but there is no reference and a lot of repetitions
I like it, especially the ending :)
AwesomeI like the ending
It sounds well