what should an online dating profile look like for a guy to catch a girls attention and talk? this is what I have
. My names jake brooks. First off I'm horrible at sending my first email so please if I start the conversation don't judge me. I love going to the beach taking walks swimming hiking. I love working hard and hanging out with my friends, warm weather is my best friend I love the out doors and listen to a lot of different music.
Im a caring guy who I'm looking for friends and hoping to find a relationship that is real. I have never cheated and I'm hoping I don't get cheated on again.
Im a friendly guy lets chat I'm looking for a real relationship. a hard worker that loves to experience new and entertaining things in life, especially with the country friends in peru. Love being busy but I love to slow things down and relax when the work is over and I have time to chill with friends. I am a very loyal person. I like all types of music and movies. I am flexible, devoted, caring, understanding and an all around good guy.
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I feel the best profile is to not write too much just because people might not want to be reading a story as your profile. Keep it short,but giving enough info about yourself. OK for starters get rid of the your horrible at sending your first email. That's an unnecessary statement to make and it doesn't make you sound confident. Another thing is you have a few things in here that are repetitive. Such as you mention the you are looking for a relationship in both your 1st and 2nd paragraph. Just mention it once. And then the way you describe yourself I'd combined all that in one sentence you are saying it in multiple areas. I'd also get rid of the cheating part. You could say something along the lines of your looking for an honest person as you would be giving them the same. Just tweak it a little bit and your profile will be great. Hope this helps!0