Most Helpful Girl
It's really nice. And it's kinda got a sad vibe to it (?), so it might make her cry. Well, at least, if a guy I liked played that to me, I'll cry.
But are the first three phrases before the climaxing portion a little repetitive? (forgive my musical terms, I ditched them ever since I decided I didn't want to pursue a diploma)
But overall, it's a really well-written piece! I loved it :) even though I have close to zero experience in tremolo music.
Most Helpful Guy
It is good but as the other answer said a bit repetitive but that will come with time and practice when you can include more moods on your pieces.