So I want to hear how you'd react if you got my poem and read it was about you. I want to show it to someone, and all my friends and family would make fun of me, so I'm showing some strangers.
"My heart became a bit heavy,
and I didn't even realize it.
And so when I saw the butterfly,
I only saw how fragile she was.
But then she reached out,
and I dreamt about falling through the open air.
So maybe fragility is lightness,
a willingness to be tossed around by gusts of wind,
in exchange for the chance to fly. "
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Just show it to her! My boyfriend shares his writing with me and it's honestly one of my favorite parts about our relationship. Like you said, people don't understand how vulnerable you are when you write and more so when you show people that writing. If she writes poetry herself, she'll understand that vulnerability and probably appreciate the act. It's not like what you've written is bad at all, so just go for it!