- First person past tense
- First person present tense
"I hike up my old fishnets and adjust my short skirt before approaching the expensive looking vehicle that has pulled up to the curb in front of me. The windows are tinted, so I can’t see inside."
"I hiked up my old fishnets and adjusted my short skirt before I approached the expensive looking vehicle that had pulled up to the curb in front of me. The windows were tinted, so I couldn't see inside."
Most Helpful Girl
I prefer to write in past tense haha present slightly harder because it's like living in the now
For past I'm always like
Ok I write creepy emotional stories as my teacher used to say
Because it's easy for my to portray such deep emotion into a charted first or third person haha
And past tense just makes it much more of an impact
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Most Helpful Guy
You should change it up and expand upon your writing skills. Maybe have two characters, one in past tense the other in present and when they meet it changes to third person,..