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Original (so you can see how much I ruined it ;P):
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Not too bad. Your tone is kind of weak, but that should improve as you practice more. You definitely struggled a bit on the last couple high notes, but that's because you weren't adjusting your placement. You don't want to place your voice in your chest. You want it in your head. It's kind of hard to explain, but you should push up from your diaphragm into your head, where your receptors are. Singing nasally might help give you an idea of how it's done, but don't make that a habit, lol.
Overall though, I've heard much worse. You were consistently on pitch throughout, which is nice. And Evangelion. <3 Rei is best girl.