I've posted the draft on Youtube, it is still very sketchy, and you can see where I've began to refine a few of the frames, so it's not very pretty right now.
Here it is:
Please let me know what you think and what you think I could add/change!
I know the timing for most of the slides is off, I did make this into actual video format at two in the morning, so I neither had the patience nor state of mind to try TOO hard haha. Then after my abismal attempt youtube went on to shake it up further so... yeah.
Please let me know what you think I can do!
Especially with the end, where it just goes black. I need to fill that up with some frames, of SOMETHING.
Also yes I know, the anatomy and linework is absolutely shoddy. It WILL be cleaned up, these are literally the first sketches of each frame so far, and all were done quick so I could move onto the next.
(also the song is called Bird Song and it's by Florence The Machine)