Can I get a little feedback on this poem I wrote?

I can never escape it
This soul crushing loneliness
It's always there
Never ceasing
Never fading
In a crowded room
In an empty theatre
Amongst these faceless masses,
I am
Nothing
Another speck in an insignificant world
Friends become enemies
Enemies never change
All I ask
Is why?
Why do I feel this way?
I have friends
Family
But I push them all away
Not letting anyone close
Not wanting to hurt anyone
When I am gone

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  • I mean I like it.
    It doesn't have rhythm or rhyme but I assume you were going for that.

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  • Well, tbh there's no rhyming scheme

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    • What does that have to do with anything? The poem is free verse. Free verse poems don't typically have rhyming schemes. That's the style of poetry it is

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