What do you think of my first poem?

You made me feel loved, when I felt unlovable.
You took that back.

You made me feel worthy, when I felt worthless.
You took that back.

You made me feel comfortable in my own skin, when I felt uncomfortable living in it.
You took that back.

You made me feel alive, when I was a walking corpse.
You took that back.

I foolishly gave you the only thing I had. It was my love. You took that and refused to give it back, To store as a souvenir to your collection. Now I can never give the only thing I once had.

If I can take something back, it would be all the moments I spent loving you.

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  • I loved it 10 out of 10

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    • Would love to hear more of them

    • Thanks :D I started doing this recently, if I make a decent one again, you'll see it

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What Guys Said 3

  • Here's mine:

    You can be a leader or a follwer,
    But id rather be a dick than a swallower

    I don't know how you like your stake, but im in rare form
    My momma jumped out a plane I was airborn

    Almost drowned in the pussy so i swam to her butt,
    Space was kinda tight had to push out a milk dud

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  • Nice bit of prose.

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  • Loved it

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What Girls Said 1

  • I think you're someone hurt you.

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    • Yep you guessed right 😂

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