So how's this haha 😛?

Okay so I'm back and I wrote this thingπŸ˜‚
Got any opinions?πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Right here this girl
She made my head swirl
Her eyes shined like pearl
Oh yeah! Oh Yeah
She made me a Romeo
My heart became a stereo
for her! for her!
Yeah I used to stare her from the start
She didn't even know she had my heart
I loved her from every angle
For her my heart used to jangle
Yeah, All I lived for was that smile
those crazy moves and that killer style
She made me crazy in love meanwhile
Cuz Right here this girl
She made my head swirl
Her eyes shined like pearl
Oh yeah! Oh Yeah
She made me a Romeo
My heart became a stereo
for her! for her!
Years later from now
We were in high school
She was so freakin' lovely
I used to drool
Everyone knew how I felt
In front of her, I used to melt
Fear of using her made me truthless
Oh my god! You were so ruthless
My courage was crappy
but I was still happy
cuz Right here this girl
She made my head swirl
Her eyes shined like pearl
Oh yeah! Oh Yeah
She made me a Romeo
My heart became a stereo
for her! for her!
Years passed, college came
Still couldn't tell her, what a shame!
Her photo was in my heart-shaped frame
I knew I was just being so lame
She was my close friend
but this wasn't the end
Against all the fears, I had to stand
I went to her said I love you so much
Babe all this time I've been craving for your touch
Baby touch my soul and make me whole
Either play the role or return the heart you stole
She looked at me, shed tears of joy
Came close and said You don't know it boy
I thought you'd admit earlier than this
She came in my arms and gave me a kiss
From that day to now, She has same bliss
She is still restless like a fish
cuz Right here this girl
She made my head swirl
Her eyes shined like pearl
Oh yeah! Oh Yeah
She made me a Romeo
My heart became a stereo
for her! for her!

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  • Find Your Beautiful Soulmate Today on GirlsAskGuys. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ jk.

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  • Nice mate!
    I'm a poet/lyricist/writer as well!!
    I see you trying to rhyme it up to match but you forgot to form your Grammar! But all in all a nice penmanship

    By the way, are you in school or college?

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    • Ugh bud, do you know about that poetic license? Poets are forgiven if they play with grammar abit to match up the rhyming scheme lol

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    • well you don't know my surname. Do you?
      it's Fakespearre
      Halucinator Fakespearre. Nice to meet yaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • Likewise, my fellow Poet!
      I just discovered that I can publicize my poems on this platform! Sweet!πŸ˜œπŸ˜‰

  • Doesn't read very well, but i could see it sounding better in a song. you're gonna have to upload you singing it and post it as an update!

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  • You shouldn't have asked this question now. 14th Feb is yet to come πŸ˜‚ Should've waited till then πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  • Beautiful

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