What do you think of my 2 poems?

Blue, Quiet, & True:

There is a solemn sound in every silence

& it vibrates back a gratitude

there is a sound to every violence

between every peace,

an interlude

There is a piece of you inside my heart to this day

in the valves it will kill me

the more who leave me this way

In every piece, the artist tells a story

sometimes it’s random folly

other times tales of glory

If right or wrong

somber or sorry

or full of rage

I’m on the same page

in all but the story

If heartstrings played notes

I would play mine on the corner for tips

never smoke again

& parade it around in road trips

For there is a solemn sound in every silence

as my heart, huge

beats for you

But alas I play no other instruments

I can but feel inside

the blue.

I'm Not Right:

I am left

irrelevant & unwanted

Irrelevant by social standard

my fears, confirmed

leave me haunted

Dispensable, amiss

Loveless & airborne

as a not a bird

but a disease,

welcome as the pollen

inconvenient as the

sneeze

The features that make me worthwhile

could be done better

by a dog

I am born under the sign of the boar,

a bore, & fat as the hog

That my lungs steal the air of

greater society

is an unwritten crime

What behooves most men

passes by me like a comet

I’m a pile of something

farther from gold than vomit

I’m left without love for the throng

& be it right or wrong

I exist

in a state of

tainted origins

with a smile painted on.What do you think of my 2 poems??

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