Most Helpful Girl
Did you.. actually rape her and make her kill herself? I hate to admit that I enjoyed the song or poem, but if it's all true and you ever do that again I hope the worst is out to get you.
Most Helpful Guy
Far far better than what my teachers made me read at the school.
PS: I found it great, but I don't think rhyming is appreciated as much as we think. I think it's good for short poems only, for the longer works, it's not necessary.