With ever breath, with every kick.
Your warmth consumes me, while the fan chills my back.
I feel the pitter patter of your heart in my ear as i breathe in the left over smell of your cologne off your chest.
I realize you are my home, my want; my whole exsistance.
I can fell you absorbing into me with every breath you take, me breathing you in.
If this is what loving you is, i dont want it to end.
Most Helpful Guy
It doesn't suck, but read it aloud and imagine you telling that stuff face to face. If it sounds natural that way, it's well written.
Most Helpful Girl
It’s really good, just pay more attention to spelling mistakes