Your Opinion on my Poem?
What Girls Said 1
The first two lines don't mix well, in my opinion. But the rest of them good enough for girls to go 'aww'.
What Guys Said 1
Honestly if it isn't perfect it shouldn't matter going through the the effort of making up something original is enough emotion in it self. You'll be good but the first two lines don't mix as aialex said.
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