Your Opinion on my Poem?

"When you speak, you looks is attractive, tell me why you got inside my heart. Is it because you are so kind? Is it because everyone loves you? To me, You are who you are. I love you because it is just you."

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What Girls Said 1

  • The first two lines don't mix well, in my opinion. But the rest of them good enough for girls to go 'aww'.

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What Guys Said 1

  • Honestly if it isn't perfect it shouldn't matter going through the the effort of making up something original is enough emotion in it self. You'll be good but the first two lines don't mix as aialex said.

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