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Most Helpful Girl
Tbh I am not feeling it. I like the one with the music in the background and the one you made your ex because they illicit some emotional response. I’m not sure how to describe it. Since I know nothing about animation I can't critic it on a professional level or offer advice.
Most Helpful Guy
Thank you for inviting me dear Sketch Forger.
As matter of fact, I guess there are few scenes where the characters are laughing out loud (what I have seen with my eyes) but don't really sense it as for my ears did not hear it well! I guess you could improve the audio in those sections, also the synchronization Audio/Video.
The last few seconds of the animation seem to me as if you just wanted to be done and threw bunch of things together for an ending.
Try to improve the ending ;-)
That is my own honest opinion, but am not really an expert in animation, just in software engineering, server side scripting!