How are my writing skills?


This is a song I wrote, inspired by those written by NF's account. But because its too long to post here, I had to post it using my friend's Google Drive. Any honest (And constructive) feedback would be appreciated!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LUepicwCGk_xBcuw6nlHTZZHYtlrHE9PNdLUqCfL3qE/edit?usp=sharing

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Most Helpful Guy

  • I give you a 8/10, it’s actually really good but I think you could do it a bit better

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  • It’s alright

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  • I like it, I'd be interested to see what kind of music you'd put to it to match the deep emotionams expressed

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  • Your lyrics are beautiful feels like from the heart. I was wondering one thing though!
    Your song title is happy but you song is opposite of that...

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  • yea its good but if u want a hit song u need a reapeted chorus

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  • If you work hard
    You can do it professionally
    You know that right?

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  • 10/10 best I have seen

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  • Mine are ok for me

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