https://youtu.be/Y3Prq13QSsYTake this as a betrer example to how the voice is louder yet the drums are still very place taking. And melody can still be heard.
What do you think about the lyrics?
The "to me too" bit has to go away. The lyrics would fit better to a slower song. Or a faster one. This rythm just does not work. The drums never chabge in a song. open.spotify.com/.../6qPJG9s20lWTMVR5uU1ToL in the intro of rhis song you can notice how the drums change from time to time.
And what about the second part starting at 2:16 ? And thank you for letting me know what you think of it!
The 2:16 part is too repetitive (guitar). To the second part, add some piano, on the firdt part ditch the whatever that jazz/blues instrument is called. Make some new and better melodies.
Ok, thank you for commenting and I'm gonna ask you one more. I sang when I was drunk, you can hear my voice clear here. What do you think of it? Can you tell me? https://youtu.be/uihj5cO0J-0
The voice sounds clearer and better than the past examples, this actually sounds decent compared to the others. But dont take me too seriously, im not a voice specialist xd
Okay :D Thank you anyways for commenting and helping <3 happy Christmas
Sorry something went wrong when im writing... Merry Christmas!
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