Can you rate my short poem?

I'd like to start writing lyrics for music. I'm not so experienced with writing but I have to start somewhere.


If I could sleep all day,

I'd wake up to the sunset...

just to mock it in it's face.



Let me laze in bed and after night...

I'll lay awake and shut the blinds,

to hide the sun and shield my eyes.



Moving past an entrance of dreams...

Leads a path to untold theaters.

Imagine endless skies, radiant beams.



Life is growth and growth is change.

My life is damned so I deem.

My living delusion where dreams remain as dreams.
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