I need someone who is good in English grammar please!

i am writing a letter of motivation for abroad and need the help of a native English speaker please

"...but it also helps me to develop a geocentric model, which is for sure a major goal not only for my second SBWL International Business but most of all for myself."

so is "myself" correct or "me"?

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oh and I need another word for excellent too please

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Most Helpful Guy

  • It's correct. The "Me" and "Myself" part.

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What Guys Said 2

  • "Myself" will do a better job which is more professional than "me" which is kind of informal.

    Other words for excellent would be superb, outstanding, and distinguished.

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  • "Myself" is fine.

    Drop the "to" before develop.

    I would also get rid of the "for sure".

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What Girls Said 1

  • I think it's correct. You can google synonyms for excellent.

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