How to write an amazing description?

I've got a mock tomorrow for English and I want an A* but how can I make my description amazing and get the whole 25 marks? It will either be on a situation, person or place. How can I make mine great and memorable? I'll include language features! Any other tips to get A/A*. How can I make more amazing... I'll have 45 minutes and have to write 2 sides of A4 paper.
Any help would mean a lot.


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  • Go into more detail than you think is strictly necessary. Make sure that your language flows though (don't put in so much detail that you're basically just listing adjectives). If it sounds like something you would read in a good, engrossing book, you're on the right track.

  • Your grandfather or your father.