Do you know anything about Parallelism in english?

I was supposed to craft a 4 line structured writing purely made of parallelism? Here's what I have:
The chaos that stirs the curdling fetid air of morbidity and bloodshed,

The chaos that stifles the wordless screams and clothes soaked red,

The chaos that thickens the air like honey into a timeless knife edge,

The chaos that mills the clouds into a pristine black swirling dread bed,

Can you tell me if this is any good or not?


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  • Very profoundly written. I say it's perfect.

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