How sad is this poem?

I went to a party, and remembered what you said
you told me not to drink, mum so i had sprite instead
i felt proud of myself, the way you said i would
that i didn't drink and drive, though some friends said i should
i made a healthy choice, and your advice to me was right
as the party finally ended, and the kids drove out of sight
i got into my car, sure to get home in one piece
i never knew what was coming, mum something i expected least
now i'm lying on the pavement, and i hear the policeman say
"the kid that caused this wreck was drunk" mum, his voice seems far away
my own blood all around me, as i try hard not to cry
i can hear the paramedic say, "this girl is gonna die"
i'm sure the guy had no idea, while he was flying high
because he chose to drink and drive, now i would have to die
so why do people do it, mum knowing it ruins lives
and now the pain is cutting me, like a hundred stabbing knives
tell sister not to be afraid, mum tell dad to be brave
and when i go to heaven, put daddy's girl on my grave
someone should have taught him, that it is wrong to drink and drive
maybe if his parents had, i'd still be alive
my breath is getting shorter, mum i'm getting really scared
these are my final moments, and i'm so unprepared
i wish you could hold me mum, as i lie here to die
i wish i could say i love you, mum please remember that i do
this is my final goodbye mum
i'll never forget you

i almost cried when i first read this.
please rate 1-10. 1 being not sad and 10 being crying


Most Helpful Girl

  • A six to a seven.

    • i wouldn't be surprised if someone actually cried because of this. my mistake is that i pictured me being in this when i first read it

    • Thanks for the MHO😊

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