Is this perverted and wrong?

Johnny is 17 years old. One day he was taking a walk in the park where he saw a little girl who looked lost and confused. He saw a man come up to her and offer a loiipop, then try to grab her. Johnny stepped in and said are you related to her in any way sir? The guy ran off. Johnny took the little girl's hand and they eventually found her older cousin, Quan who's 21. Johnny blushed at Quan and stayed silent for a few seconds. Quan said thanks bro, you should come over my place for dinner. And they did. After everyone went upstairs after dinner, Quan said alright Johnny it's time to go but Johnny just blushed and stared at him.

Quan yelled why the hell are you staring at me man? Johnny says sorry and dropped his phone, they both reached for it and touched each other hand. They stared at each other then kissed passionately and went upstairs.
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  • That's romance

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  • Just cheesy romance. Probably something I see the middle education girls reading or writing. Not perverted though... except for the old man.

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  • Not perverted or wrong. Just very unrealistic and the start of shit porn.

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  • Sounds like c-grade fiction written by someone with delusions of romance. It isn't that perverted or wrong, it's just dumb.

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  • Well the old guy with the lolipop was but other then that nothing perverted or wrong. Sounds like a bad porn though.

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  • No, it's just weird, and old school movie cliche romance.. Lol..

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  • Nah that's not perverted.

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  • What the fuck is wrong with you.

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  • lol @Ripper_E

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  • It isn't wrong or perverted in any way

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  • abc after school special

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  • That last part literally sounds like some crappy homoerotic fanfic or story. Like... so cheesy. Wow.
    The first part is definitely wrong (not the "rescuing") though.

    Are you trying to write some kind of story?
    If so, you need to look up how to make a less cliché one.

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  • Nah, just cliche and unrealistic.

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  • This is like Fan Fiction written by a 12 year old.
    lol No I don't think it's wrong.

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