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I am going to read this to her in person and look her in the eyes when I do. (Fingers Crossed)
Please provide additional notes worth adding to the message or if something sounds weird.
(She's with a rebound guy, less than a week after breaking up)

The past 2 weeks or so I have been searching everywhere on how to get your ex back. Truth is all of them suck. None of them apply to our unique and special situation. This is not trying to sound desperate, and I hope this isn't clingy because thats part of the reason you left. The past 8 months my life has improved dramatically. The first day I saw you, I knew there was something special. Your'e the best thing thats ever happened too me. Everything I am telling you is coming directly from my heart and onto this paper. I understand the relationship we had is hard. I have a plan to fix all of this. I am not the most attractive guy, not the most masculine, or the nicest guy ever. Meeting you has been a gift all on it's own. I am not going to play the sad or the begging card. I want you to date this guy, but I would be honored to have the next spot in line. You are a special girl who deserves everything good. The most unique and cutest girl I have ever met. Anyway I had two options. Do what this "love website" tells me. Or to do what my heart tells me to do and pursue the girl of my dreams. I can't speak for anyone else, but in my eyes you are truly the most beautiful girl in the world on the inside and out. I love all of you. These gifts are small, but they mean much more than what theyr'e worth. When you take this "promise ring" you officially have a best friend for the rest of your life.
May I be your best friend forever? May I have the next spot?

I have a promise ring I bought a long time ago, and a necklace I never got to give to her.
If you were in this position... Yes or No?
We broke up because it's hard to see each other. Her parents don't know about her and I.
She is 18, I am 16. Please vote. :)
"If it were you."

I remember when I dated these two girls.. (No not at the same damn time it was separately) I dated them and when they both broke up with my ass they went to another guy. I was soo sprung and inlove that I pulled out all the tricks in the book to get each of them back, I sent flowers and can't and I'm very poetic and I showed them I really cared and I'm sorry for the way I've treated them. I even watched the food network channel and made italian food and stuff and one of the girls loved sushi so I learned how to make sushi... I was desperate to get those girls back. I swore I was winning because they were hangin out with me and going places with me and coming over and saying all this sweet stuff, dedicating songs to me and shit lol! then one day they each chose the other guy. It happened TWICE!!! I was destroyed on the inside and I isolated myself for months!. only work and home no parties. And I drank a lot. (Long story short), It hurt soo much on the inside that I began to hate them because I felt abandoned and betrayed. Losing a girl to me is nothing but Losing someone I love with my heart and soul is like someone cutting off my arm or a leg... It's bee a long time but I still hate them til this very day and I'd probably let them die If they were hanging off a cliff. Is it just me that feels this type of hate or are there others out there that share my passion?