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There's a story idea I had, where my character was a magical entity, who travels to a different city in North America every month, finding good, caring, wholesome, but unhappy people. 90-99% of the people in any given city are not good, wholesome, or caring, let alone all of those things but down on their luck or unhappy, so finding them is hard. Whoever I could strike up a conversation with, and discover that the pass the "good person" trials through conversation, my character would grant their one greatest wish, as long as it was limited to themselves or close family members or friends (no wishing for world peace or for dinosaurs to come back or anything).

The first guy, was small and sickly, like pre-serum Steve Rogers. He had sickle cell anemia or something. After discovering he was a truly good and humble man through conversation in a bar, my character initiated the final test and asked him for $20. He gave it to me, so the next day, he woke up with perfect health, as well as a body better-than-new. He was now fully healed and his mother no longer had to pay for his medical bills.

The second person, was a short pale blonde woman who was kind to others, but hated herself and her looks severely. She was more pragmatic and jaded in life than the first man, but she was still a good person; her self-hatred just kept her kind side a little supressed. After talking to her, my character asked her for $20, which she eventually gave a "what the hell" agreement to. The next day, she woke up 5'11" with 34DD's, a gorgeous clear-skinned face, and a perfect gym body, like a supermodel or Olympic athlete. She looked in the mirror and started crying with joy.

My character then continues the search for a new deserving person to grant another wish to. If the person is bad or undeserving, it can cause unforeseen chaos and trouble to the local world around them. So they have to be good, deserving people to mitigate any negative consequences to happen.