Religion & Spirituality

What do you think of this song I made?

I call it Fall of the Sinners. I wrote it on paper as one of my English class assignments. We had to write sentences with context clues using 7 words (I used all 10 though I think). When I got it back the words “very interesting…” was on the back. It’ll probably be hard to read though so I’ll just type it all here. This happens during the biggest War in Yvridio Vaseilio (at the very end, like, the end of the main series) and possibly the biggest War in all of existence.

Fall of the Sinners

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-oooh!

You should’ve known from the start, you victory was precluded. It’s impossible for you to win, especially when filled to the brim, with sordid, nasty, disgusting, AND the most unspeakable sins. You enchant others with nudity, but now it’s time to stop. Only with the Lord can you achieve impunity, unless you wish for your soul to get doxxed. As an opposer you’ll get retribution. Prepare for the consequences and immolation. Don’t be fooled, all the enemy wants is destruc-TIONNNNNN-ah! Do not ever question the Lord’s connoisseurship. He is all-knowing and has the holiest and strongest drip. Overseeing God Willa allow the Devil to impose. He’ll exploit you with human’s greatest honors, which he shall propose. You must start recoiling but without fear. Anyone can abolish all evil with God near. Though it’s already too late, you walked the path down here. Others like you have endeavored, you too must start trying. The Devil is obstinate, will never stop lying. You too though must be stubborn, or you will never be free. The unsaved always experience a succession of horrors and spells. Choose the side of evil and your end won’t turn out too well. Fall to his interrogations and you all will go to HEEEELLLL!!! *small explosion*

So, what is your choice?

………never~

Then never it shall BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

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Those of you who are retarded, I don’t want to hear you hiss and moan because he’s a real Christian. “Oh yOu pOoR keED”. Respectfully, shut thy duck up, just say what you think about the song itself or go find some other pig
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